Modifiers can be a single word: an angry elephant; a phrase:
Vernon chased the furious, trumpeting elephant down the hill; or
a dependent clause: Vernon, who was nearly fainting from fear and anxiety,
chased the furious, trumpeting elephant down the hill.
Oh, what a tangled web we weave: some laughable sentences resulting
from misplaced modifiers can be found here.
Misplaced modifiers: If modifiers don't clearly refer to the words
they should modify, confusion ensues.
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Position a modifier near the word it modifies.
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CONFUSING: An elephant rumbled down the street, grey with dust.
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CLEAR: A grey, dusty elephant rumbled down the street.
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PRACTICE: Revise this sentence so the modifying phrase is correctly placed:
"The behavior of a chemical compound in the laboratory that is put together
is similar to the behavior of an identical compound obtained from plants
and animals growing in nature."
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Make sure a modifier clearly refers to only one word.
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CONFUSING: The supervisor who was conducting the interview thoughtfully
posed a final question.
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CLEAR: The supervisor who was conducting the interview posed a final, thoughtful
question.
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PRACTICE: Revise this sentence so "often" modifies one word: "Sitting in
the hot summer sun often accelerates the skin's aging practice."
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Move modifiers that split sentences so that sentences aren't cut in two.
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CONFUSING: The agent signed, with her client seated beside her, the contract.
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CLEAR: With her client seated beside her, the agent signed the contract.
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PRACTICE: One of a manager's responsibilities is to successfully manage
conflict.
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PRACTICE: Despite severe economic limitations, many third-world countries
have in efforts to improve the health, well-being, and education of children
invested huge sums.
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PRACTICE: Many managers are unable to with difficult employees establish
a moderate and reasonable tone.
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Dangling modifiers: Make sure introductory phrases or clauses refer to
a specific word.If the sentence is in passive voice, an introductory clause
which refers to an invisible agent can be very confusing.
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CONFUSING: After appearing in Pretty Woman, it was clear Hollywood had
a new star.
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CLEAR: After appearing in Pretty Woman, Julia Roberts became Hollywood's
new star.
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PRACTICE: Dominated though they are by a few artists who repeatedly get
the best roles, millions of people flock to the cinemas.
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CONFUSING: With his weary, sardonic style and his dangling cigarettes,
the persona of the private detective was etched into the American psyche.
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CLEAR: With his weary, sardonic style and his dangling cigarettes, Bogart
etched the persona of the private detective into the American psyche.
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PRACTICE: Knitting together the two disparate areas of Peru, mountain and
desert, an economic ans social synthesis was achieved.
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PRACTICE: Voting for the status quo, the issue was resolved by tabling
the motion.