PRACTICE EXERCISES FOR COMMAS
Commas are commonly used to: a) set off a modifying phrase or clause
that beings a sentence; b) set off a transitional word, phrase, or clause
that begins a sentence; c) set off a modifying element that ends or interrupts
a sentence IF the modifier qualifies, contrasts, or makes an exception
to the main clause.
Here's a source for more info on comma usage: http://www.wisc.edu/writetest/Handbook/Commas.html#definitions
In the sentences below, rewrite so that the transition or modifier comes
at the beginning or end of the sentence, using commas correctly. Some are
correct.
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Bulgaria attacked SErvia and Greece in 1913 in a second war over boundaries.
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Bulgaria was carved up as a result of the 1913 war by its former Balkan
allies and Turkey.
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The assassination of the Archduke Ferdinand of Austria the following year
brought on the First World War.
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A sprawling new nation, Yugoslavia, was formed after the collapse of the
Austro-Hungarian Empire.
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The aspirations of Croats and other minorities in Yugoslavia were suppressed
under the tenuous domination of the Serbs.
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The collapse of the Ottoman Empire at the same time left many ethnic Turks
subject to their longtime foes the Bulgarians.
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A million Armenians were slaughtered at the same time as a result of attempts
at forging a new Turkish state in Anatolia.
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Undermined by corrupt and meddling monarchs and by ethnic passions, parliamentary
governments of southeastern Europe rose and fell.
Essential or restrictive modifiers don't use commas. Nonessential
or nonrestrictive modifiers need commas.
In the sentences below, combine the pairs of sentences and use commas
to set off nonessential modifiers or no commas around essential modifiers.
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Film by its very natujre is better able than prose to present the event
in all its intensity. Even the most sober historians are willing to admit
that fact.
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In some instances the film has turned out to be more historically accurate
than the original historical account. Vivien Leigh's portrayal of a spirited
Scarlett O'Hara is now considered to be a fairly accurate interpretation
of the not-so-helpless Southern belle.
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Of course there have been plenty of instances of mistakes in historical
representation. A film might carefully reproduce the cultural material
of an era but skew the facts of the event.
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Viewers are more comfortable if the film ratifies their personal biases.
Hollywood history films tend to reflect the biases of their viewers, especially
in political matters.
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Bonnie and Clyde transformed a vapid Bonnie Parker into an aggressive
moll. Anne of the Thousand Days transformed an ambitious and strong-willed
Anne Boleyn into a lovesick, awestruck girl.
In the sentences below, place commas where needed, remove unnecessary commas,
or leave the sentences alone.This is a parody of an anthropological study.
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Despite the fact that these people are so punctilious about the care of
the mouth, this rite involves, a practice which strikes the uninitiated
stranger as revolting.
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It was reported to me that the ritual consists of inserting a small bundle
of hod hairs into the mouth, along with certain magical powders, and then
moving the bundle in a highly formalized series of gestures.
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In addition to the private mouth-rite the people seek out a holy-mouth-man
once, or twice a year.
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These practitioners have an impressive set of paraphernalia, consisting
of a variety of, augers, awls, probes, and prods.
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The use of htese objects in the exorcism of the evils of the mouth involves,
almost unbelievable ritual torture of the client.
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The holy-mouth-man opens the client's mouth and using the above-mentioned
tools enlarges any holes which decay may have created in the teeth.
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Magical materials are put into, these holes.
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If there are no naturally occuring holes in the teeth, large sections of
one or more teeth are gouged out so that the supernatural substance, can
be applied.
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In the client's view, the purpose of these ministations is to arrest decay,
and to draw friends.
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The extremely sacred and traditional charactger of the rite is evident
in the fact that the natives return to the holy-mouth-men year after year,
despite the fact that their teeth continue to decay.