Formal Paper 5

TITLE: The Monster in the Machine/The Angel in the Machine

Objectives: to conduct extensive research into an appropriately narrow topic; to marshal significant evidence in support of original claims; to create a unified, coherent analysis.

Audience: an educated, computer literate Net audience

Description: In his 1997 book Interface Culture: How new technology transforms the way we create and communicate, Steven Johnson writes: "There's a funny thing about the fusion of technology and culture. It has been a part of human experience since the first cave painter, but we've had a hard time seeing it until now.  ...Why should the connection seem more feasible to us today? The answer is simple: speed. Technology used to advance in slower, more differentiated stages."  

Your task for this paper is to write about the connection between technology and culture. Yep, this is a huge topic, so one of your immediate and most important tasks will be to narrow your topic. You can't write about all aspects of technology and culture in a mere 8 (or more) pages. You will need to find a topic  which is narrow enough to allow you to go into depth but broad enough to allow you to find relevant sources and say interesting things. For example, if you chose to discuss the use of virtual reality in the sciences you'd be choosing a topic that was way too broad. On the other hand, if you chose to write about the pros and cons of using VR to aid surgeons, you would indeed have a sufficiently narrow topic. But here's an important tip: don't simply present pros and cons. You have to take a stand. Are you in favor of this application of technology, or do you think the liabilities are too great and the benefits too small?

You must have a clear thesis statement near the beginning of your paper. Your paper must be analytic; that is, you cannot simply accumulate and synthesize the "facts" of the issue you discuss, but must focus your material around an original insight/observation of your own.

This will be a collaborative paper.  Teams are listed below. Both of you will be responsible for half of the paper.

IMPORTANT ADDENDUM:  WRITING CENTER VISIT Your team MUST visit the Writing Center BEFORE the final draft is submitted. You can do so before the rough draft is due, if you like.  But there must be a tutorial which you both attend before December 10.  MAKE YOUR APPOINTMENT WELL IN ADVANCE.  The second half of the first semester is THE busiest time at the Writing Center.  If you make your appointment before the rough draft is due, the session should be 30 minutes in length.  If you make your appointment after the rough draft is due, because of the length of the assignment, your tutorial will be 60 minutes long.  (In the latter case you can simply bring the draft with you to the tutorial.)

Some possible topics include (but these need to be narrowed):

To prepare for drafting this paper you will need to: You'll want to include in this paper the following, not necessarily in this order: Deadlines:
Nov. 13: Thesis statement due
Nov. 27: First draft due
Dec 10: Second draft due

Points: 225

Sources: 6+ sources. Only two of these sources may be texts assigned for this course. I suggest you skim at least double that number and throw out half as not completely relevant. Use correct APA format for in-text citation and end-of-text bibliography.  Note: If I find it difficult to determine the sources of your ideas and information I will ask to check your sources, so write down URLs accurately and conscientiously, keep copies of articles you use and have any library books you might use available for my inspection. If you xeroxed/printed all your sources anyway, please attach them to your paper.

Minimum Length: 8 pages

Each writer should  include a one-page commentary on the problems/successes you experienced while writing this paper.
 
Teams:
1.:  Kristen, Qing
2.: Maddy, Patrick
3.: Nick, Lorry
4.: Jonathan, Brett
5.: Adam, Ben, TJ*
6.: Eryn, Frederick
7.: Colleen, Carter
* For this team, each will be responsible for 1/3 of the paper, and the paper should be at least 10 pages long.

How will this be graded?

There will be two points assigned: a score for the whole product, and a score for your portion. I'll then average these for your individual grade.
This means you must clearly indicate on the paper which section(s) you were responsible for.

Team problems
You must EMAIL me if you are having a problem with your team member BEFORE the rough draft is due. I'll then schedule a meeting with both of you.