Formal Paper Three


Title: Hollywood looks at technology

Thesis statement due: October 13
First draft due: October 22

Second draft due: November 17

Objectives:  to anaylyze fictional works; to break down a topic into subpoints for discussion and analysis; to generate a thesis statement

Audience: readers of salon.com

Task:  The editors of salon.com have asked you to write a serious analysis of  how technology is depicted in modern American culture. They want you to write about the movie Blade Runner , because they believe it touches on some of the most important issues regarding humans and technology. They would like you to discuss two other presentations of technology in modern films or literature in addition to Blade Runner.  They have also laid out some other guidelines:

While it's not a perfect example, the editors of salon.com have pointed you to an earlier review of the Bruce Willis film 12 Monkeys to give you ideas. (You may have to live through an advertisement, but the salon.com site is still free for one day.) They said, in doing so, that this article is a little too narrow because it just talks about the film and Hitchcock's Vertigo. However, they also said its focus on the relationship between 12 Monkeys and Vertigo was thought-provoking.

Length: 5-6 pages or more

Points: 150

Sources: The editors have stipulated that you refer to two secondary sources as well as your primary sources. These could well be reviews of the works you're studying. Primary source: an original work of art or historical document. Secondary source: an analysis or interpretation of a primary source.  The editors have indicated that scholarly sources would be perfectly acceptable and might enhance the persuasiveness of your article.

Commentary: For every formal paper, a one-page commentary on the process you went through as you completed the first draft is required. This commentary is NOT included in the page length requirement.


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