Formal Paper Three
Title: Hollywood looks at technology
Thesis statement due: October 13
First draft due: October 22
Second draft due: November 17
Objectives: to anaylyze
fictional works; to break down a topic into subpoints for discussion
and analysis; to generate a thesis statement
Audience: readers of salon.com
Task: The editors of
salon.com have asked you to write a serious analysis of how
technology is depicted in modern American culture. They want
you to write about the movie Blade
Runner ,
because they believe it
touches
on some of the most important issues regarding humans and technology.
They would like you to
discuss two other
presentations of technology in modern films or literature in
addition to Blade Runner.
They have also
laid out some other
guidelines:
- Supporting detail is crucial. This means specific description of
visuals, quotation of dialogue or lyrics, and names of actors or
artists
when appropriate.
- Citations. The editors want you to cite the sources you use
(according to APA style). This may seem weird, but in the editorial
process the editors will discover the list price for these works and
post them in a sidebar, and host ads for amazon.com and other online
booksellers.
- A thesis or main idea. The editors INSIST that you come up with
a position or main idea on the general theme of the presentation of
digital identity in
pop culture. I'll give you an example, but DON'T use this one in your
paper:
"The predominantly negative depiction of identity and self in Blade
Runner,
The Matrix, and William Gibson's Virtual Light stems from general
fears of social control and loss of individuality." No, a thesis like
this can never be "proved". But it can be supported in persuasive
ways with concrete evidence.
- A break-down of points or ideas. The editors want you to have
several (probably 3-4) main subideas or subpoints which support your
main thesis. In the example above, I might break down my thesis further
with these subpoints: 1. Technology is usually equated with faceless,
insensitive, inhuman bureaucracies 2. An individual is
usually alienated--socially, psychologically, and physically--from
mainstream life. 3. There are Christian motifs of persecution and
rebirth.
- This is NOT a review article. Hence extensive plot or
characterization summary is NOT desireable.
While it's not a perfect example, the editors of salon.com have pointed
you to an
earlier review of the Bruce Willis film 12 Monkeys to give you ideas. (You
may have to live through an advertisement, but the salon.com site is
still free for one day.) They said, in doing so, that this article is a
little too narrow because it just talks about the film and Hitchcock's
Vertigo. However, they also
said its focus on the relationship between 12 Monkeys and Vertigo was thought-provoking.
Length: 5-6 pages or more
Points: 150
Sources: The editors have
stipulated that you refer to two secondary sources as well as your
primary sources. These could well be reviews of the works you're
studying. Primary source: an original work of art or historical
document. Secondary source: an analysis or interpretation of a primary
source. The editors have indicated that scholarly sources would
be perfectly acceptable and might enhance the persuasiveness of your
article.
Commentary: For every formal
paper, a one-page commentary on the process you went through as
you completed the first draft is required. This commentary is NOT
included in the page length requirement.
Example of a good student paper