1) While seeing Threads
of Hope think about points that you can describe in the present tense. Helpful extra
information Pinochet.
2) Write a
description of
the film.
First
paragraph
• Does your
first paragraph
have an introduction? Can the reader understand what you're writing
about
without seeing the film? (use the film's title.)
• Does the last
sentence of your
first paragraph state the main focus of your essay? You'll have to
backup
that focus with several details in the body of the essay. The
last
sentence should complete this sentence [In this essay, I will talk
about] ________________ . The elements in brackets ARE NOT
included in your main
idea.
Second paragraph
• Does your
essay have
specific details from the film that support the theme of your essay?
Last paragraph
• Does your
essay have
a conclusion that gives the reader the overall or general idea of the
film? Do not included any reactions or opinions for this first essay.
3) Check sheet for revised
essay
_____ Include
on one line
on top left of the page, your name and assignment name (ensayo #1).
_____ Type using Times
New Roman,
12 point font, double-space, 1” margins.
_____ 1 page in length,
typed
accents (not handwritten),
typed tildes (not
handwritten), and
correct punctuation.
_____ Incorporate a title
and divided
into paragraphs
_____ Bold main idea.
_____ Underline
10 new
vocabulary dealing with description (Cap 1) and 5 uses of ser/estar.
4) If you need help, please
see me or the tutor for help on content with your draft. She will
only
guide you, don't expect her to catch all your
errors. She's
available Monday and Thursdays 9am-12pm. To see me, please email me.
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